found a broken page. turn 185, decided to leave dinner with sam and willem, then decided to say goodbye to sam. three separate error messages, including for going to the next page
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Uncle Callen joins in. "She's just a bit tired, Sam. S'been a long day for the lass, y'see. Even before meetin' you out in the forest, I had 'er trainin' for a good hour."
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Aunt Sonia comes to your rescue. "Isabel's had a bit of an arduous day. I had her swinging a sword around for about an hour before she even came and met you, you know." She explains. His expression shifts to show understanding, and a little bit of shame for being so disappointed initially. "Oh! Right ... well," he looks back at you, now smiling, "I hope you sleep good, then!" "Thanks..." You smile sheepishly. "See you later, Isabel." The boy smiles, giving a flappy wave.
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anyways OMG IT JUST STOPS THERE??? I WAS GETTING SO INTO IT TOO OMGGG
I LOVE THIS AAAAAA (my brain cant form anything right now.)
anyways, I CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW THIS WILL GO!! I AM SO DRAWN TO THE CHARACTERS, AND WHAT WE'RE GONNA BECOME (and not to mention that strange entity in our dreams WHO ARE YOU)
and also the side story in our dreams (omg is that gonna be relevant somehow? WHATS GONNA HAPPEN??) (my theory is that it might have to do with the thirteenth god) (maybe maybe)
also NOOOO UNCLE CALLEN-- I ALMOST THOUGHT HE WAS GONNA DIE (luckily he didnt, I would sob and then collapse) I love him so much, hes so girldad. so babygirl (omg im so sorry for using such words DASFJNJBJH)
aunt Sonia tho?? PLEASEEEE LET THIS GIRL HIT. SHES FUMBLING SO BADDD (no but I love her too, shes so cool, and funny and shes trying her best I love her I LOVE HER RAAAHHH)
but then again, it did say that she was going around with woman in the past so maybe she actually is charming (I dont know if I'm wrong, sorry if I am, but I JUST ADORE HOW SHE FOLDS AROUND WOMAN AHAAAAA) (because thats so real.)
also why doesnt she speek with lizzy anymore?? what happened?? :(( please dont tell me something bad happened--
anyways. I LOVE THE STORY!!! (get some rest if you need to, btw, dont feel pressured TAKE CARE MWAH MWAH)
Just to let you know, there are a handful of coding errors, but I can't complain, I'm not even good at Harlowe yet, and this looks to be a more Sugarcube style game.
I adore it! I love Archer's character especially. Amazing job!
You don't! My apologies if the dialogue for being more closed-off has read that way so far. I'll take a bit more care to make things seem more balanced - I've just been playing reactions up for a (currently) young MC.
Lovely story, lovelier characters and great layout! I love the skillchecks and stuff throughout, truly filled with potential!!
ALSO! on turn 390 the off-put and disgusted choices are swapped! eg; I pick off-put for my reaction to the crowd and it shows me the disgusted screen, and vice versa! it could be confusing for someone who was set on one choice, and wasn't trying to decide between both of them by looking at both! lovely game!!:D
spoilers, I warned u :3
IM SMOKING YOU HAVE TO SELECT THE OPTION TO WHISPER IN SONIA'S EAR ABOUT WEARING TO GET BACK AT THE GUY WHO HURT HER TO GET THE OATH OF REVENGE THING
Thank you for pointing out the error! I'll take a look at it :)
And I'm not sure if your last part is also pointing out an error haha, but you can swear the oath earlier. To get it in that moment, though, you do have to whisper it. I might add a silent option in that scene too, for less impulsive MCs. Thank you for the feedback and praise! It means a lot.
Good to know! 😆 I'll take any feedback that comes my way. I like knowing what people think.
If you're referring to the prologue, you have a few ways of going about things, from accidentally killing him to very intentionally doing it. It was an intentional choice on my part to make those options a little bit sadistic to show off the MC's deteriorated psyche at this point in their life.
There are lots of options to do it in the prologue. The second option as you find the altercation is an instant kill, as are the second and third options for the option after that (there's a lot of branching here lol).
If you choose to talk to the guy or throw him down first, there are also options that state MC's intent to kill him. You can't kill anybody else in-game--yet.
As far as I am, the story is well fleshed out, and wonderfully written. But I cannot for the life of me read "Weaver" without thinking of Taylor from Worm, LMAO
Dunno if you knew about this error or not but when I pressed “Have you been to anything as big as this before?” You ask to Aunt Sonia. It comes up as this in Chapter 2. I think the other choice may also not be accurate on turn 272.
I love Archer so much, can't wait to see where this day out with them goes!
I noticed a slight error in the end of Chapter 2, where it presents your personality. It said I was more cautious than confident, despite my character sheet saying the opposite and me not picking a single cautious option throughout!
There's an android .apk version available for download (albeit outdated at the moment) but I don't have the files for the game publicly available to download, sorry.
Followed this Game for about more than half a Year now and just come back to it every month or so just to replay it!
Its genuently Phenomenal, the revised Prologue is one of the best i have read yet, it immediately caught me in the story and i cannot wait for the next Chapters to release, ill be here waiting patiently!
Same!! It really allows you to get invested in the characters, and you immediately get to impact the world around you. I tend to return when I'm itching for a witcher-esque game!
Got me so invested fr. The plot seems quite intriguing, especially since the beginning revealed how things went down. I love how we get the chance to kill and be cold rather than being forced to settle with few choices. I'm looking forward to MC growing up and hopefully we get to make more friends other than Sam.
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absolutely amazing!! one of the best stories i've come across. AND OVER 350K WORDS???? THATS LIKE THREE-FOUR NOVELS
also will the full version be free? and as another commenter mentioned- please let us get our
momaunt a girl lmaothis is so peak!! i love it!!
the only thing i will ask for is for an option to get my (not) mom a girlfriend lmao
found a broken page. turn 185, decided to leave dinner with sam and willem, then decided to say goodbye to sam. three separate error messages, including for going to the next page
Error: cannot find a closing tag for macro <<if>>Uncle Callen joins in. "She's just a bit tired, Sam. S'been a long day for the lass, y'see. Even before meetin' you out in the forest, I had 'er trainin' for a good hour."
Error: child tag <<else>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<if>>Aunt Sonia comes to your rescue. "Isabel's had a bit of an arduous day. I had her swinging a sword around for about an hour before she even came and met you, you know." She explains. His expression shifts to show understanding, and a little bit of shame for being so disappointed initially. "Oh! Right ... well," he looks back at you, now smiling, "I hope you sleep good, then!" "Thanks..." You smile sheepishly. "See you later, Isabel." The boy smiles, giving a flappy wave.
Error: <<if>>: bad conditional expression in <<if>> clause: unexpected token: string literalI miss my wife tails, I miss her a lot.
anyways OMG IT JUST STOPS THERE??? I WAS GETTING SO INTO IT TOO OMGGG
I LOVE THIS AAAAAA (my brain cant form anything right now.)
anyways, I CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW THIS WILL GO!! I AM SO DRAWN TO THE CHARACTERS, AND WHAT WE'RE GONNA BECOME (and not to mention that strange entity in our dreams WHO ARE YOU)
and also the side story in our dreams (omg is that gonna be relevant somehow? WHATS GONNA HAPPEN??) (my theory is that it might have to do with the thirteenth god) (maybe maybe)
also NOOOO UNCLE CALLEN-- I ALMOST THOUGHT HE WAS GONNA DIE (luckily he didnt, I would sob and then collapse) I love him so much, hes so girldad. so babygirl (omg im so sorry for using such words DASFJNJBJH)
aunt Sonia tho?? PLEASEEEE LET THIS GIRL HIT. SHES FUMBLING SO BADDD (no but I love her too, shes so cool, and funny and shes trying her best I love her I LOVE HER RAAAHHH)
but then again, it did say that she was going around with woman in the past so maybe she actually is charming (I dont know if I'm wrong, sorry if I am, but I JUST ADORE HOW SHE FOLDS AROUND WOMAN AHAAAAA)
(because thats so real.)
also why doesnt she speek with lizzy anymore?? what happened?? :((
please dont tell me something bad happened--
anyways. I LOVE THE STORY!!! (get some rest if you need to, btw, dont feel pressured TAKE CARE MWAH MWAH)
You've got yourself a new fan!
Just to let you know, there are a handful of coding errors, but I can't complain, I'm not even good at Harlowe yet, and this looks to be a more Sugarcube style game.
I adore it! I love Archer's character especially. Amazing job!
Im a huge fan! But if im an introvert, does that mean i have to be unfriendly? Cuz im trying to create a shy but kind MC for this play
You don't! My apologies if the dialogue for being more closed-off has read that way so far. I'll take a bit more care to make things seem more balanced - I've just been playing reactions up for a (currently) young MC.
Lovely story, lovelier characters and great layout! I love the skillchecks and stuff throughout, truly filled with potential!!
ALSO! on turn 390 the off-put and disgusted choices are swapped! eg; I pick off-put for my reaction to the crowd and it shows me the disgusted screen, and vice versa! it could be confusing for someone who was set on one choice, and wasn't trying to decide between both of them by looking at both! lovely game!!:D
spoilers, I warned u :3
IM SMOKING YOU HAVE TO SELECT THE OPTION TO WHISPER IN SONIA'S EAR ABOUT WEARING TO GET BACK AT THE GUY WHO HURT HER TO GET THE OATH OF REVENGE THINGThank you for pointing out the error! I'll take a look at it :)
And I'm not sure if your last part is also pointing out an error haha, but you can swear the oath earlier. To get it in that moment, though, you do have to whisper it. I might add a silent option in that scene too, for less impulsive MCs. Thank you for the feedback and praise! It means a lot.
NO IT WAS JUST N OBSERVATION BCZ I WAS SO CONFUSED WHEN I PICKED THE CHOICE THAT GETS US LECTURED BY ARCHER
AND YOUR WELCOME!! I'm happy you even care abt my opinion lol I'm not an IF connoisseur, but I really like his work either way!!!
OH SORRY IF ITS TOO MUCH TO ASK BUT TO GET THE SCENE WHERE YOU CAN LIKE KILLAGUY DO YOU HAVE TO BE COLDER & MORE VIOLATE??Good to know! 😆
I'll take any feedback that comes my way. I like knowing what people think.
If you're referring to the prologue, you have a few ways of going about things, from accidentally killing him to very intentionally doing it. It was an intentional choice on my part to make those options a little bit sadistic to show off the MC's deteriorated psyche at this point in their life.
WAIT NO LIKE HOW DO U GET THE SCENE TO KILL EM AT ALL IT NEVER SHOWS UP FOR ME 😭
There are lots of options to do it in the prologue. The second option as you find the altercation is an instant kill, as are the second and third options for the option after that (there's a lot of branching here lol).
If you choose to talk to the guy or throw him down first, there are also options that state MC's intent to kill him. You can't kill anybody else in-game--yet.
Very ambitious. Pleasant enough UI. The story reminds of Wayfarer, another excellent IF.
Nicely written except for some jumbled bits where it muddles or disregards choices. Many code errors. All granted for a demo.
Other than that, well set to be one of the better IFs. Good luck!
As far as I am, the story is well fleshed out, and wonderfully written. But I cannot for the life of me read "Weaver" without thinking of Taylor from Worm, LMAO
This is definitely going in my top five IFs, it's absolutely incredible!! I'm so excited for the next few chapters :DD
This has to be one of my top three IF demos, the dialogue is written beautifully and I am so excited to see where this story goes, thank you conrif!!
Dunno if you knew about this error or not but when I pressed “Have you been to anything as big as this before?” You ask to Aunt Sonia. It comes up as this in Chapter 2. I think the other choice may also not be accurate on turn 272.
I've found this bug and fixed it. It'll be gone in the next update :)
I love Archer so much, can't wait to see where this day out with them goes!
I noticed a slight error in the end of Chapter 2, where it presents your personality. It said I was more cautious than confident, despite my character sheet saying the opposite and me not picking a single cautious option throughout!
I'll look into this, thank you!
Absolutely loving this! Your writing is delicious ❤
<333 It's amazing :D
Is there a downloadable version of this game?
My browser refuse to run it.... >_>
(Although it seems to run downloaded browser based games just fine. I have no clue why. o_O )
There's an android .apk version available for download (albeit outdated at the moment) but I don't have the files for the game publicly available to download, sorry.
Followed this Game for about more than half a Year now and just come back to it every month or so just to replay it!
Its genuently Phenomenal, the revised Prologue is one of the best i have read yet, it immediately caught me in the story and i cannot wait for the next Chapters to release, ill be here waiting patiently!
Same!! It really allows you to get invested in the characters, and you immediately get to impact the world around you. I tend to return when I'm itching for a witcher-esque game!
Got me so invested fr. The plot seems quite intriguing, especially since the beginning revealed how things went down. I love how we get the chance to kill and be cold rather than being forced to settle with few choices. I'm looking forward to MC growing up and hopefully we get to make more friends other than Sam.
really like this cast, can’t wait for them to break my heart
In various ways 💔