The update was fantastic! I cannot wait for more! Found a few bugs, thought you might want to know so adding the screenshots:
P.S. Thanks for the "light mode" (reading dark screens with white writing actually makes your vision worse if you are a person with astigmatism so my eyes appreciate it 😊)
Sonia's dialog always makes me laugh so much. I absolutely love her. I love imagining an MC that's slightly violent with a potty mouth and too much energy having her as a guardian as opposed to a kinder more reserved MC with Cal as a primary guardian. The update was so great tho. That talk with Sonia and Cal actually made me tear up alil. It was so emotional. You did wonderful with this update and Sam is an adorable bean who I'm already inlove with ♥️
I'm glad you're enjoying the characters so far haha. I really try to make each of the mentors' personalities distinct and I'm glad that's coming through in the writing! I've heard a few people talk about how they want to base their MC off of Callen and Sonia's personalities - being the opposite or similar to them, and I'd love to have text in the game that references this.
And thanks, the interface is still a work-in-progress but I wanted to overhaul it a little for this update, it looked fairly basic initially.
Very excited for the rest of the story! currently, it's just the prologue but it's set up in a way that makes me want to learn more about the characters (aka callen/sonia) and the world itself.
cannot wait to blade some weaves in later chapters 🙏🙏
Tonight seems to be my night for finding really good reads. I must say tho as a new mom the panicked "wtf do you do with a uncomfortable baby" bit made me laugh. this was sooo pleasant to read. You are really talented at drawing in a reader. Like dude. Great job.
This is going into my fav to watch for list. Good writing at its finest. If this is just the start I can't wait for the rest. 😇
Prologue is very well written so far. Was very engrossed and could get a feel for the setting and characters, there's not much out now but am keeping an eye to see the rest.
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I'm so excited to meet the other characters ✨ your writing skills are phenomenal and I adore everything about the plot ( ◜‿◝ )♡
The update was fantastic! I cannot wait for more! Found a few bugs, thought you might want to know so adding the screenshots:
P.S. Thanks for the "light mode" (reading dark screens with white writing actually makes your vision worse if you are a person with astigmatism so my eyes appreciate it 😊)
Thanks, I've updated the demo now to fix that issue. And I'm glad the light mode is helpful for you!
Sonia's dialog always makes me laugh so much. I absolutely love her. I love imagining an MC that's slightly violent with a potty mouth and too much energy having her as a guardian as opposed to a kinder more reserved MC with Cal as a primary guardian. The update was so great tho. That talk with Sonia and Cal actually made me tear up alil. It was so emotional. You did wonderful with this update and Sam is an adorable bean who I'm already inlove with ♥️
Ps the interface looks really good too 😇
I'm glad you're enjoying the characters so far haha. I really try to make each of the mentors' personalities distinct and I'm glad that's coming through in the writing! I've heard a few people talk about how they want to base their MC off of Callen and Sonia's personalities - being the opposite or similar to them, and I'd love to have text in the game that references this.
And thanks, the interface is still a work-in-progress but I wanted to overhaul it a little for this update, it looked fairly basic initially.
i loove dis already !
Thanks!
This is such an incredible beginning.... definitely excited for more ✨
this is so amazing!!!! 💗💗💗
Very excited for the rest of the story! currently, it's just the prologue but it's set up in a way that makes me want to learn more about the characters (aka callen/sonia) and the world itself.
cannot wait to blade some weaves in later chapters 🙏🙏
Tonight seems to be my night for finding really good reads. I must say tho as a new mom the panicked "wtf do you do with a uncomfortable baby" bit made me laugh. this was sooo pleasant to read. You are really talented at drawing in a reader. Like dude. Great job.
This is going into my fav to watch for list. Good writing at its finest. If this is just the start I can't wait for the rest. 😇
Thank you so much for the kind words! More is coming soon, hopefully haha.
Prologue is very well written so far. Was very engrossed and could get a feel for the setting and characters, there's not much out now but am keeping an eye to see the rest.
Thank you for the comment! I'm hoping to have more out soon, including the first chapter.